| Rating: | ★★ |
| Category: | Other |
VOICE
A voice inside me
It's my voice but she's not me
She told me I'm useless
She told me my face is annoying
But I'm still here, doing nothing
And I feel empty
Waiting for someone to hold me
I know nobody is coming
A voice from my darkside
It's my voice but she's not me
She told me to die
She told me to see nothing...
Noa:huadoh..Bahasa Inggris..TT___TT daku kesendat2 dah..
BalasHapusTapi bagus kok!~_^b
Konichiwa, Nee-chan! Hisashiburi ne! Sori yah~~~Yuki lama 'menghilang' ... ^_^;
BalasHapusPuisinya bagusss! Tapi, agak 'serem' yah.... sesuai ama nama Nee-chan : The Black Princess... ^e^
Yuki : Maksudnya, aq 'serem', gitu? *3*
BalasHapusNoa : B.Inggrisnya ga tlalu susah, kan... ^_^
Oya, sbnrnya ni puisi dah lama bgt! Tapi baru aja 'diketemukan kembali'... ^_^;
Noa:yea..Tapi ada bbrp yg ga ngerti..XDD
BalasHapusNoa : oh yeah? which one you don't understand?
BalasHapusUmm... Nee-chan emang kadang2 nyeremin, sih...
BalasHapuspuisinya ngegantung bgt.
BalasHapus& bahasanya kurang kena (maap klo sok ngeritik ^_^)
@ Yuki : what the... ?!
BalasHapus@ Poetra : emang sengaja kubikin ngegantung, utk memperkuat kesan 'dark'nya. 'bhs kurang kena' gimana? emang sih, ini puisi lama, dbuat pas kemampuan english-ku masih pas2an. udah diubah beberapa kali sih, tapi... ^_^;
(sbnrnya, aq masih bingung, mo pake kata 'told' atau 'tells'...)